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Six and a Half Experts View the Beast

an undream poem, 2018/12/11-2019/1/31, by Wayan;
answering Wallace Stevens' Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird

THE PHILOSOPHER

The Orn manages not to exist;
Its use is this.
A thing unique all firmly know
That is not so.

THE PRAGMATIST

Tuesdays in Bernal Hill Cafe
I meet to write with my
Sharp-eared friend Monique.
Pointed critique.

THE RIDER

They call me immature
For dreaming I'm a mare
Who longs for one wild ride
From that lover purer
Than the coarse and hairy
Boys who smirk and swear
I'll one day want to marry.

THE BELIEVER

Scoff away! But to endure
As my flesh decays
In a nation drear,
I need my (call it childish) faith
In her wildergrace.

THE GEOMETER

The Unigon is that polygonal shape
Having one single infinite face.
Contemplate with care!
My blind studies show
Witnesses all grow
Dizzy; their discourse
Mystical. Beware!

THE BEAST

Who sees her own brow? It isn't really mine.
If not for you all yelling yourselves hoarse
I'd feel free to be a mere
Equine.

THE POET

Of course
You can't see every horn. In my queer case,
Minutes may pass ere strangers divine
That nebular shine around old Horse-
Face.

Girl and unicorn, done as stained-glass window; dream sketch by Wayan. Click to enlarge.

The Unigon (a freehand circle, with one side or infinite sides).

The Horsehead Nebula--photo.

NOTE

At her writing salon, my friend Catshall dared us to try a list-poem like Wallace Stevens' 13 Ways of Looking at a Blackbird. His had circles, fairytale images (glass coach!), and heaps of fake Zen... but never the blackbird's viewpoint. I thought, as a mythical beast myself, I ought to fix that.

Why do I speak as a unicorn? A long history of dreams saying flatly I'm not fully human. Recently I learned I really do have a rare mutation causing physical fragility, high intelligence but mild autism, an inability to recognize human faces (animals are easier), and a hyperactive empathy making conflict, competition, and predation near-impossible. Also rather horse-faced--but in my case it ain't superficial. Twilight Sparkle, all the way down...

This poem tries a rhyme-scheme I don't know the technical name for--surely I can't be the first to play with it? You flirt with a few key words but dance around them till the final lines; here the keys seem to be unicorn, queer, face, and, of course, horse.



LISTS AND LINKS: unicorns - equinity dreams: Bastard Unicorn, Horse Voters & A Nevadan Ass - viewpoint - (mostly dream-) humor - poems - art experiments - a (psychic? subliminal?) dream of Unicorn Stain-Glass Windows - ink (line) & digital (tinting) - two more experimental poems from Catshall's literary salon: Off Dover & Ode to Not Writing Odes - mystic dreams of My Little Pony

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